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by Selena_Kitt

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LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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ishtatishtatover 15 years ago
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You could perhaps omit the words "from" until "she" inclusive and perhaps lose nothing by it

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
OPTIONS ARE SIMILAR TO BODY PARTS

each has more than 1. TK U MLJ LV NV

melimelissamelimelissaabout 6 years ago
might need retittling

not a haiku - wrong form and wrong syllable count

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