Trusting the Wolf Ch. 01

well

This one is good I like it this far cant wait for more. soon i hope keep up the great work.

OOOOH

Can't wait to see how this turns out! He sounds rough n dark n sexy yay!

Yey!!!

Please coninue, can't wait to read more!!
S

Oh my my my

I'm liking Nathaniel already! lol Not to say I don't like this story, but I'm hoping you'll also finish up Jess and Finn soon. Absolutely wonderful work on all your stories!!

Good

Glad to see you continuing the saga.

well

this is goodddd!
i love nathanial alredy :D
im hoping for more finn and jess though tooo
but this is absolutely fantastic !!!!
thanks for the new story i was wondering what would happen after you finished outwitting the fox and now i know :]] !

Do you have issues?

He's a rapist and all you (people who have commented) can think of is that he's "rough n dark n sexy?" That's ridiculous. I'm not even going to consider Nathaniel until he proves himself worthy.

wonderful start!

Oh i love it. Great job. To whomever wrote: Do you have issues? Pls Rape! Come on. i read it many times and no where does it say that.

Intrigued and ready for more!

Great start...I can't wait to find out the full atory behind the history between Faith and Nathaniel. As for what tnme3 said, if this guy was an abusive rapist, I'd be in complete agreement with the comment made, but there seems to be a lot more to the story...and two sides, so I'm withholding my opinion. I'm looking forward to hearing more about Alex and Ryder...their story was my favorite in this series. Thanks for writing! :]

Interesting Start

Seems to have stirred up mixed feelings and we will have to wait and see how it all pans out. PJ xx

got me interested

keep going! :)
I dont think he is a rapist..I think its more like she was young and he seduced her then left her, young love smashed. anyways I'm ready for more!

Glad to see an update,

but I'm desperate for more of Jess and Finn.

Too early to tell if I'm going to like this new set of protagonists. I'm sure she has good reason for hating him, even if it wasn't rape. Being unwillingly seduced, especially as a virgin is almost as bad.

Anyway, looking forward to more, from all of the characters in your world.

more

write more in this story line please i would like to no more about finn and jess

Awesome!

I have read all your submisions and have loved them, though i started with Sabeen and Marcus' Story, I ope you continue to write and finish Faith and Nathanie's story, looking forward to the next chapter.

loved it! hope you update more.

Bravo !!

Oh my goodness that looks like it's going to be another good one. I can't wait for the next chapter. Bravo!!

More Please xxx

please continue with this story coz in outwitting the fox you have faith and nathaniel working 2gether so please give me more of the story.
pretty please xxxx

Keep on going

Hi
Came across your stories the other day,got hooked and had to read them all!! Great stories and top quality characters. Keep on writing, please!

Please please continue!!

Hey there, I keep checking your submissions to see if there are any new stories and to reread the others!! Please please continue this story, I really enjoy your writing, so please keep it up!! Thanks
S

Fantastic start!!!

Love the character development, and so far I can see Faith is an emoowered woman. PLease, please more and quickly!!! Keep Faith strong too.

please write more chapters please

i love all your stories and i'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens because i read outwitting the fox and i know that they end up working together

Great Intro

Your story was submitted on my birthday.. How cool...
I can't wait until the next submission for those two...

WHAT'S NEXT???

I WONDER HOW THEY WILL END UP AND WHAT'S THEIR HISTORY...GETTING EXCITED HERE!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! LOVE IT!!! I NO ITS BEEN A WHILE BUT I HOPE UR STILL DOING UR STORIES!!!

Please continue

I am hoping you will continue this story. I have loved all parts of it and can't stop reading. Thank you for all your hard work.

Inspiration??

Heya Kitten, you haven't posted any new stories in a couple of months and I am so anxious to read the follow up to this chapter (and your other stories :)Your writing is great!!! Your stories are hot!!! Your characters are amazing!!! Hope this comment inspires you to keep writing,....for my sake :)