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Beeeeeautiful...!
Aaaaw! I just love happy endings but most of all I just love your work! :-) Makes me wish I had someone special. You sure do not disappoint. You are one of my favourites. I like all the openings you leave for future stories. Keep doing what you do best. Write your heart out. Thanks for always keeping me smiling. Thats what you do with you heart-warming stories.:-) Cat
not enough
I really liked your story but I think that it needed just a little bit more. I wanted you to write some more about Dill and Tilly. What happened to Finn and Sky in this part you hardly mentioned them. Other than that it was one of the BEST stories I have read. Please keep on writing.
Loved this story
Like the previous comment I'd like more, of everything / characters as I was really pulled into the plot. This was really well written with a nice balance of humour, conflict, romance, explosive passionate sex and sensuality. I hope you do some kind of continuation with the new unit in future situations. I'd like to know more about the torture and testing of weres. The threat hasn't totally gone away so that would be a good opportunity for further stories, hint, hint!
thank you
Thank you ingarlm, the story is lovely, You made an advent reader out of me. The other two stories that I read wasn't bad either. This is good
ani
Wonderful.
Simply a great story that it worthy of being read and enjoyed more then one time, it never gets old.
great story
I really like this story. Keep it up
fantastic read!!!
I was hooked after reading the first chapter. Getting to know each character so intimately, and being with them on a journey which not only lead them to self discovery, but also lead them to love.
I found this story very captivating, and enjoyed every moment of it. You brought these characters to life with your words. Such an amazingly talented writer.
I could feel your words, the love, passion, respect and admiration that oozed out of these characters were at times very intense. I can't wait to read more of your work.
Thank you, please keep it up lol ^_^
I loved this story. It was wonderful and I love your writing. I hope I get t see how Sky and Finn's relatonship develops.
this was amazing. i wish there is more to come. keep up the good work and writing.
beautiful
Really great story. So excited to read the sequel!!! I hope there is more about Finn and Sky.
great!
I loved this story! Total page turner, great writing. Please write more! I'd love more about any of the main characters.
Wonderful story
I loved the whole story and so am only now commenting. Brilliantly written and put together with the partners and their jobs intertwining. Well done!! Onto the sequel now....
Wonderful!
I am another who waits til the end to comment, but good news, I totally loved it!! 5 stars from me...now to find that sequel!
Outstanding story!!!
This story is amazing! You did such a wonderful job. I hope to see their story continued soon. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
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