All Comments on 'Allie's First Time Receiving Oral'

Good story development and especially liked putting the mutual descriptions in the middle which kept the mystery up and running. Unique. Good writing style too. Go to the head of the class.

I guessed who "Bob" was long before the end of the story but I believe you meant that to be. In fact, I think you handled the whole thing very well. Let's see more of your clever writing.

I'm not a usual reader of this topical area, but the title intrigued me. Very well done story that went beyond the bump and grind kind of thing so often found on the site. I liked how you put the emotional aspects into each character and the build up to the end. Keep it up and look forward to reading another one from you.

What a wonderful piece of writing! I loved the description of the inner turmoil both of them felt.

Please write more!

The anticipation of truly finding the identity of her mystery lover holds the readers interest. Very nice style.

I am a straight woman but did not always behave that way when I was in college either. Maybe because it was an all-female college had something to do with that, but it seems to me that oral [at least receiving oral] should be an equal opportunity matter.

I liked the suspense of who the giver was. Even though from the context [and the "lesbian sex" label] did tip it off a bit, there was still a good amount of buildup prior to the identity being given.

To sum it up: DAMN!

That was a beautiful story of intimacy. Well written, sexy, awesome. Thank you for sharing with everyone.

What a lovely story :)

Not the best, very cheesy ending, oral sex part wasn't greatly detailed. You definitely need some work, good effort

I thought it was a great story. I've had thoughts like this just not game to act

LOVED it! ..tho obvious , continually using pronoun 'he' , that it wasn't...

not exactly uncommon theme/story for F roomies to get each other off...hooray!

always thought females a lot more fluid, and glad for it...! tho strapon becoming their fave mildly surprising-good for them!

tho Allie, describing herself, as her breasts 'smaller than average' threw me...

what's average? and I LOVE petites... and glad more stories with them....

easy 5 and fave