All Comments on 'Fullmoon Wedding Ch. 05'

I was such a great story, but just seemed way too rushed in the end. However, completely looking forward to the next story!

with the other responce. It did seem a bit rushed. The first 2-3 chapters were great. But the last 2 chapters just seemed completely rushed. It would have been nice to see after their wedding... them just being themselves... maybe honeymoon... etc..etc.

Well, im really hoping the other story with the child down the years will be great! Goodluck with writing it. I cant wait till i get the chance to read it.

Yea, had writer's block, requests, and a bunch of other things going on. I've never actually finished a story before in my entire writing career. Hopefully the next one, when I have time to get to it, won't be so rushed. And I was going to do little flash backs on Katrina and Donovan in the child's story. Gotta have something to work from.

I loved this series and I can't wait for the next one to come!