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So, just an FYI, folks
Once again, my attached note has been swallowed up during the submission process (though I just figured out why...). Anyway, I wanted to say that this chapter...not the best, and I apologize for that. I mentioned it in a comment on Ch. 8, but I've had some writers block/distraction lately, and I struggled a bit writing this.
Ch. 10 is coming, so hopefully some of you will stick around after reading this current chapter. :)
OH! And keep an eye out for my new story, "Sweet Talk"--the first chapter should be up in a few days. It's sort of an experiment, so I'd love to 'hear' what people think.
~EVE
*sigh*
Extremely arousing scene! I loved it! Thank you for not abandoning this story even though it's been tough!
whoa
i think that was the most amazing non sex scene ive ever read.. thank you!
Oh wow
I do not think this story lacked anything! And might I say that was the hottest, sweetest non-sex scene I have ever read! You are truly an amazing writer!
Excellent
Hope you can get to chapter 10 soon! This is a great story.
Really enjoy all of your chapters
Thanks for posting them here for us to read.
FINALLY!!!
That is all I have to say FINALLY!! I thought you were never going to bring this story back then I see you updated like 2 chapters I have to say I am very very proud of you...I hope you do not disappoint your fans and stop updating this story and then come back 20 years later to update one chapter so please for the sake of your fans update soon and don't take to long in ending this story!!!!
Thanks!
Absolutely great! Keep it up!
Fantastic!
Nothing seemed amiss with this chapter. I still love this story, and it's really fun to read the dialogue between Rainey and Aidan. And what a coincidence...I was eating sliced strawberries with sugar when I read that scene. Too bad I didn't have someone like Aidan to feed them to me! Keep up the great work!
A true romance story
I am fairly new to Literotica, so this is my first time reading about Rainey and Aidan. I cannot imagine having to wait 2 years for the next installment of their story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us the next chapter soon.
Enjoyed this chapter!
Couldn't detect any evidence of writers block at all! I just hope that you keep up a decent pace and finish this story! It's too good to leave it hanging again.
Where are you?
Don't leave us hanging here! :'( Please update soon!
so very happy
So very happy you're back !
Rainey's back ! Aidain's back too !!
And we got new characters !! Yay ! I love Anna of course !!
As in she's brilliant, she makes my heart ache and i really hope she's gonna stay head strong against that pig !
I suck, I know. :)
Sorry, guys--I've been distracted by the other story I'm working on, life in general and, well, not being satisfied with what I have done for Ch. 10 of Rainey. I think a big part of the problem is perfectionism--it's a killer. :(
Anyway, I'm making every effort to have Ch. 10 complete and submitted by the end of this week. So, if all goes well, it should post by around Jan. 14th. I know--it's a long time, but, at this point, that's the best I can do. Hopefully I haven't pissed you all off to the point that you boycott future installments! haha (I laugh, but I'm sort of serious, lol)
Losing interest
I'm starting to lose interest in this story. Been waiting for a new chapter for awhile now and to see more chapters of that other story added before this one is really frustrating.
what happened??
I love this story!! but there are no updates??
frustrated
I think you should stop saying you're going to update at a certain time since you never seem to keep to them. I loved this story, but I'm quickly losing interest having to come back to no updates again and again.
Time to end it!
I love Rainey's story and am one of those that waited for 2 years. Maybe, you should start to think about how to end it, so the rest of us can move on.
Driving myself insane...
Okay. My super long silence with this hasn't been intentional. At all. I've been struggling with this story, despite the fact that it's the one I really, really want to finish up. Ugh. Anyway, rather than guessing when/if I'll get past my issues with writing, I'm just going to apologize. For those interested, feel free to send me a message or an email (the address is on my profile) and I'll let you all know once I submit new chapters.
Chill
First off I first read this story awhile ago. I liked it then, I like it now. So it didn't get updated for awhile, oh well. As a reminder to everyone, there is something called LIFE which sometimes gets in the way of things such as erotic fiction.
It's disheartening to see people leaving angry comments purely because an author doesn't update quickly enough or when she said she would. Again, there's more to life than literotica.
As an artist I can understand the whole perfectionist thing. Update at your own pace. What you produce is great work, don't compromise that so some random can have what they want.
Thank you for sharing your work. XX
Take your time
This story is awesome and it's worth the wait. And no matter what - do not feel guilty for not writing! I can't blame my fellow readers for being excited about the next installment(s), but this is YOUR talent and YOUR story. Thank you for sharing them with us.
don't worry
this is a brilliant story, and most* of us get that sometimes it takes time for the words to come.....
so don't worry..take a few deep breaths...(: and do what you can!
like the comment earlier, i agree...this story is worth the wait!
wheres the next part???!!!!!!!!
cmon i cant wait any longer now im losing interest
Okay so Patience is not my strong suit
I have been trying to waiting patiencely, but I re-read what you have written and I have so many questions. Please can you give me more. This is just the sweetest sotry.
Please keep going
I know that I'm going to sound like any other fan, but I've never had the courage to post on Literotica.
This is the best story I have ever read, and the most romantic thing that's ever got my attention. I'm sure you're very busy with your own real life, but this series is a work of art, and if you don't finish it...
Well, you'll leave broken hearts.
Keep up the great work.
where's the next chapter
are you planning on finishing the story? please finish it please!!!
please please please please
finish? if not just another wee tid bit? please? dont make me beg.
Absolutely Addicted!
You write beautifully! I get so involved with the emotions of your stories (including Sweet Talk). Can't wait to read more!!!!!
So Good....
...but where's the rest of it?!?!
Fantastic!
You are my favorite author on this site, and there are quite a few good writers here. Please continue!
I waited. . .
It is such a good story and has so many possibilities but to leave it hanging for over a year is frustrating for anyone that got sucked into this story and waited patiently for the next chapter. I have waited and waited for an update and tonight I finally am giving up on checking for updates.
Worth the wait
I love your characters! Every chapter is worth the wait and I'm excited to read what you've come up with for chapter 10. I wish i could find an Aidan of my own. ;)
THANK YOU and keep up the good work.
FINISH
Finish the damned story before I have another heart attack! (please!)
Excellent story, well written, great plot.
Thanks,
de Jay
I just read this story from start to finish-- or at least until this point. Its been a good story-- even with the large break you took in writing it. If you have a chance to come back to this story, even now, I think it would be great to continue it. There's still so much more to develop between Rainey and Aiden, Aiden's future with school and his art, Colette, and more. Definitely room for more creativity!
still waiting
Patiently! Definitely want more of this story, I miss Rainey and Aidan!
Still missing Aiden and Rainey :(
Come back!
I'm just dying to know what happens with Aidan and Rainey...such a great story. I hope we get to hear the rest of it!
Good gods.
I absolutely love it!
And here you are, leaving all of us on tenterhooks!
We'll keep on waiting as long as we have to for this story, but hopefully it won't be TOO long.
No ratings until it's finished
Sorry but it really pisses me off when an author leaves you hanging. I suggest not giving any author any ratings on their work until the damn thing is finished.
this is unfair!!!
why didn't you finish this story? PLEASE!!!! YOU NEED. TO FINISH. THIS!
why, oh why ?!
I seem to have a knack for finding brilliant stories that were never finished. If you're still writing, please make completing Rainey's Song a priority :)
C'mon!!!! Please finish this story...what's taking u so long????awwww
We your loyal readers
Demand moar lol I completely understand, as life does have a way of getting rough
very beautiful imagery
i love the part at the beginning where you describe aidens pictures from raineys perspective. it makes me feel like i'm there looking through his camera.
Please finish the story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS! aaahhhh! i love it so much!
Oh. My. God!
PLEASE tell me you are in the process of writing more! I NEED to know the ending! lol
please
More. You cant just leave it there. Surely you cant
Four years later....
And I'm still checking up on this hoping against hope that you'll give some indication that you'll continue with this some time.
Now we know
you haven't entirely gone away as 4 years after this you posted. Darn it is good. I wanted to thank you for what we have and if you never add to it, it was still more than worth a reread.
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