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Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by bruce2201/05/09

Lovely Smooth Apresentation

The dialogue is very insinuating and it is interesting to see him trying to maintain his distance. The question, of course,
is about her motivation.

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by rightbank12/06/15

I am thinking her idea of value in a relationship

is the same as his. But his experiences with women has caused a shadow to pass over what he thinks a woman holds as important.

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by rightbank12/06/15

I do hope

he finds a way to reconnect with his daughter in the near future.

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by rightbank03/02/16

as well written as this is

it's a pity more readers have not found it.

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