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Too Much Like Second Thoughts
Sick writer needs to think of new plots --IN A RUT!!!!
Why does she feel like a slut? She is common
slut trash. The only women that behave this way are sluts and her behavior is pure trash. The husband hates it be gets off on it since he cant get off on his wife. He is mentally ill and needs medical help. They both need a divorce. She needs to be free to date whoever she wants whenever she wants. And from the sound of it he needs to begin a transgender program. The whole crowd are simply losers getting off on each other.
Just another slut and a sick couple.
She is a whore but doesn't get paid for it. She doesn't love or respect the husband that is clear in everything she does. He is mentally ill and needs help. The only way this can end happily is for the wife to become a full time whore and make some money from what she is doing. And the husband to cut off what is left of his balls.
If
It looks, and smells like dogg shitt it usually is dogg shitt. This should be in interracial with Karenkay and that bunch. You know the stuff, stupid, little dicked white husband wants to see the wife with the black stud shit, the same ole same ole one trick pony these so called authers ride. Just bad porn, not erotic, you can stop now, we all know the ending.
Not one of the best chapters
but still going strong. But please, don't make her the slut she feels she is right now. Don't let her just be pushed around by any men.
Oh GAY Lord...
Read the description of the lover by wimp husband. There is a GAY section for this kind of srories.
He will soon kill whatever love she had for him
The more he makes her act like a slut the easier it will be for her to be a slut,until she finds that he isn't the man she married or wants to be with. She may find that a big cock pleasures her now, but that won't satisfy her need for intimate love. Jen had that with Michael, but his insistence for her to perform like a slut has drove a wedge between them, and the intimate love is gone. All she has now is a man with a penis complex, and memories of love, which died when Michael saw Jen make love to Randy and just not fuck him like a slut. At least that's the way I see it....Rich
If you don't like it
If you don't like it why read it? I gave it 75 but it needs to finish. I like the idea of her becoming a whore.....would set the finish up nicely.
heating up
contrary to some of the harsh comments, I think this chapter is great, and the writer has cast Jen into a much interesting rule and no doubt the following chapters, hopefully with John and Tyrone's entries, will be spicy and delicious.
Xleglover, please keep the good works coming.
She is a cheap slut!
And he is acheap cum sluts wimp cuckold. They enjoy it. As does the writer. Afterall this is his/her story.
YESSSSSSSSSSSS
I like this kind of cuckold story
This wasn't just sex. It wasn't fucking.
His wife was making love with another man
Great Story
I love this, please more more more
Great chapter can't wait for the next one. I would also like to see other people like john and tyrone to get envolved, especially tyrone. Keep up the great work!
Echhh
I don't know who is more pathetic, the pervert hubby whoring out his wife, or the slut wife. It's funny that he should get jealous when it's what he wanted, funnier still that she feels any sense of shame after doing someone in a bar, because neither of them have any particular love for the other nor do they have anything resembling a strong marraige. Fantasy aside, it makes no sense; why don't they just get a divorce, he can be her pimp and then not only can they fulfill whatever sick desires they have but also make a buck doing it.
This shithead faggot is got to be a Brit !!
Only this worthless country would allow mindless depraved sickos to write this shit !! Gutless mindless wimps,all of them !
Some good some bad
I think you write well and the stories are interesting but I just always have such issues with a guy that can act this way with his wife.
1* !
By degenerate and illiterate black monkey !!
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