by arbenitre
Fantastic! Totally loved this... (OH TO FIND THIS MAN IN REAL LIFE)
More please!
I enjoyed what you have to say but you honestly rambled a lot. You need to make a copy of this and highlight the actual activities of the day and not just the generalities of her attitude. Rewrite the separation. I appreciated her attitude and her style (and yours) but they needed to be in a separate article or at least a separate section of this article from the activities