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750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/15/08

Great Description of Group Sex

You are the master of words BFW. You haven't lost it, yet!

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by Anonymous12/20/08

Of course he hasn't lost it

He never had it to begin with.

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by Anonymous12/21/08

Yep nothing there

I agree. He had nothing to loose because he had nothing to start with. This story had no buildup or character development. Basically it sucked.

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by gperry284312/05/12

It's the concept!

The idiots don't catch the genius of this concept. You just formulated the ability of creating endless variations of the same story with change of a few words and all a new and cute scenario, or for a different client can go an entirely different direction. Very masterful.

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