That was an interesting start to this story. I hope you continue writing about Cassy and Gabel.
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Anonymous12/20/08
Grammar
In general, you have problems with homonyms and grammar. I am sure you do not know what that means. Get a dictionary and grammar book; use them extensively.
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Anonymous12/20/08
what!
goodness, please please continue with the story. I can tell im going to enjoy it.
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Anonymous12/20/08
Very enjoyable start
This story is off to a good start but I found the grammatical errors to be very distracting. You cannot simply rely upon spelling checkers to catch your errors.
Don't care how you spell or your marks in between - it is a good story and I enjoyed it very much - we have to many perfectionist on here.! You got a '5' and a 100 on your rate, best I could do.! Thanks. JAG/TSO
I like your story very much, the content is good and it flows well. Don't worry about the comments on grammar and spelling, if people seriously have such a huge issue with those trivial things they should buy published works rather than reading on a free site.
English
Different
i liked it. let just what happens between to three
Interesting!!
That was an interesting start to this story. I hope you continue writing about Cassy and Gabel.
Grammar
In general, you have problems with homonyms and grammar. I am sure you do not know what that means. Get a dictionary and grammar book; use them extensively.
what!
goodness, please please continue with the story. I can tell im going to enjoy it.
Very enjoyable start
This story is off to a good start but I found the grammatical errors to be very distracting. You cannot simply rely upon spelling checkers to catch your errors.
Cassy.!
Don't care how you spell or your marks in between - it is a good story and I enjoyed it very much - we have to many perfectionist on here.! You got a '5' and a 100 on your rate, best I could do.! Thanks. JAG/TSO
Good Work
I like your story very much, the content is good and it flows well. Don't worry about the comments on grammar and spelling, if people seriously have such a huge issue with those trivial things they should buy published works rather than reading on a free site.
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