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750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/17/08

Not the Same Story

I thought it was going to be the same stories as the others. It wasn't. Great ending!

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by gperry284312/05/12

Better than I could have conceived.

To all the critics who indicated that was a bad idea an format, what do you have to say now? A story perfectly set up, perfectly scripted, perfectly staged, and perfectly executed. Tremendous imagination, only you could have come up with concept and such a perfect ending. It goes to show that payback can make you a bitch. (lol)

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