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OMG
I love it!!!!!!!!! Please keep it updating this story and fast don't disappoint me pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
totally agree with OMG
please give us the rest of the story soon
PERFECT!!!!!!!
I haven't been this 'into' and excited about story in a long time! Love the characters and story-line. Your writing is just absolutely INCREDIBLE!
Loved It
I really loved this story . Post more soon
wow!
love this! really looking forward to the next chapters
Loved it
Great story, even if you are re-visiting charted territory. But that's OK. I mean, who doesn't like romance between friends? Certainly not me :) Looking forward to more - Shali
outstanding!
Now, that is one heck of a first chapter. Hit me with Ch.02 as soon as you can. Good work!
-- KK in Texas
Awesome
Wow, you had me so engrossed in the story, I forgot that eventually it had to end!
Great read, I cant wait for the next chapter!
Great Story
I loved your story - Can't wait for the next chapter.
EveAnna
Nice!
Jason is in for a very rude awakening! I cant wait!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! Wow! Wow! I love this story, you are an amazing writer, and I hope you update this very very soon!!
What a jerk!
I love it! He is SUCH a jerk and I hope that she doesn't let him sweet talk her out of anything, that would just be too much. Even if she didn't love him, that kind of behavior is totally unacceptable. I can't wait for more!!
ooooh
more soon please! i can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Great!
Fantastic beginning! Look forward to more.
Wow!!!!!!!!!
Sooooo good! Please don't make us wait too long for chapters!
!!!!!!!
Wow, Wow, WOW! Okay, i knew from the very beginning i'd love this story. Perfect best friend in love. Maybe it's the little masochistic in me, but i love an angsty story. PLEASE update soon!
cute
cute ch.01
Fantastic!
Pretty much flawless from beginning to end. I'm glad I stumbled upon this story. Off to read the next chapter now!
Loved it
This is better that some romance novels I've read.
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