should melt away all this snow.
Hang on Amber...any day now hunny it will happen...that cute little cherry will be history! I can hardly wait for that story.
Damn good story.... but you really need to proofread your stuff. I'm a bit of a stickler (like many on here) and there were numerous errors. I know, i've heard all the stuff from other readers who say not to worry about that and play it off.
My thing is that when i see/read a seriously well put together story, i want the author to do a bit better. Of course, there's always going to be some errors, but here they were many. Mostly punctuation and punctuality layout.
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i can't wait!!!
really ... truly... oh my..... such a sexy story... so sweet and wonderful... and stimulating!!! thank you
Wow That Was Another Good Chapter!!
That was another good Chapter in the series about amber and her teacher. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what happens over the weekend.
Something this HOT...
should melt away all this snow.
Hang on Amber...any day now hunny it will happen...that cute little cherry will be history! I can hardly wait for that story.
Another hot job Mr C.
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Damn good story.... but you really need to proofread your stuff. I'm a bit of a stickler (like many on here) and there were numerous errors. I know, i've heard all the stuff from other readers who say not to worry about that and play it off.
My thing is that when i see/read a seriously well put together story, i want the author to do a bit better. Of course, there's always going to be some errors, but here they were many. Mostly punctuation and punctuality layout.
Otherwise, good job.
Getting Each Other Off
Foreplay is all they have going between them currently. So will you get them to the final act of romance ? Age difference seems not to be there.
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