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Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 08

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by bruce2201/05/09

Nice Sub plot

I imagine that certain people on the site would hold that he is a wimp if he doesn't cancel the wedding and kick the two of them out of house!

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by rightbank12/06/15

Dear Kezza67

you do like to slip in the zingers don't you.

Here I was, hoping for a heartwarming reunion with father and daughter and you take it to another level entirely.
well played.

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by Anonymous04/05/16

Hey 'rightbank', you should pull your tonque out of this worthless writer ass !

From your past comments I thought that you are rational in your views and comments ! This is not the case. Is this pathetic writer paying you for your comments ??

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