I thought it was an interesting idea for a story. It was a little brief for my taste, but I gave it a top score. Keep writing. I like what you have submitted lately.
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Anonymous09/03/09
Sequal?
You could do a sequal. Make a story about Tammy and Dory's children when they turn 18.
English
A Loving Family
This is a well written story! The characters are relatively believable, and the plot is simple, but well put together. This is a good read!
Not a bad tale.
I thought it was an interesting idea for a story. It was a little brief for my taste, but I gave it a top score. Keep writing. I like what you have submitted lately.
Sequal?
You could do a sequal. Make a story about Tammy and Dory's children when they turn 18.
A great story
I love how the siblings found what they both wanted...a family.
Please keep up the good work!
Cute
Can't really think of what to say except its a 3 (3.5 if it could be) star story. Its got an interesting setup and like I stated already, its cute.
Greeat Story
I loved this story. I love the when Dory and Tammy finally having sex.
damn
hahahah wow she is such a cock slut im glad everything worked out for the best YAY!
Okay for a quickie
Could only give 3 stars out of five for such a short story with little buildup.
I love it. Daddy/daughter sex is hot, but I LOVE brother/sister.your stories are hot as fuck
I love it. Daddy/daughter sex is hot, but I LOVE brother/sister. And the brother being uncut just makes it hotter - I love uncut dick
Nice Ending!!
A very nice ending. Hope you continue this one. There are a lot of possibilities.
Thank you.
Great
This was a great story with a very well done plot. The characters were all believable and the ending was nothing but sweet. Keep writing.
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