You should have undressed and gone into that shower and confronted her for yet more cock sucking and even possibly breeding her in her hot sexy state of mind.
Good idea. Poor abrupt ending making the story a little unbelievable esp. if you want to have another chapter and develop the relationship.
How was he so sure the car was hers? Was she driving? Maybe he finds it still warm when he gets home. Maybe he thinks he recognizes a broken or chipped fingernail. Intrigue us. Maybe she comes out of the bathroom with a comment or a look at him that both interests and confuses him. One other thing, apparently its really hot and important for guys to see women swallowing every bit of their cum after a blow job, so that's supposed to be hot. But in this story, she's not visible to him in the other booth so he can't know whether she swallowed. The mistake happpened because you don't pay strict attention to your p;oint of view. You need to always be asking whose head are we in right now, so you don't tell us things we can't know until you set it up. cheers!
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Anonymous01/27/09
How are you sure?
In such encounters, how are you sure you will not contact ------?
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Anonymous02/24/09
hot
Wow I love the plot I hope it continues after all it is a week long vacation and she does seem like a hot little thing
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Anonymous10/13/11
More!
Really enjoyed your story but was hoping for additional chapters... Perhaps revealing her secret after many other trips to gloryhole?
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Anonymous10/06/13
stupid story
What a let down. Maybe next time use your imagination. Story reqlly sucked
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Confront her.
You should have undressed and gone into that shower and confronted her for yet more cock sucking and even possibly breeding her in her hot sexy state of mind.
Okaaaaaay
Good idea. Poor abrupt ending making the story a little unbelievable esp. if you want to have another chapter and develop the relationship.
How was he so sure the car was hers? Was she driving? Maybe he finds it still warm when he gets home. Maybe he thinks he recognizes a broken or chipped fingernail. Intrigue us. Maybe she comes out of the bathroom with a comment or a look at him that both interests and confuses him. One other thing, apparently its really hot and important for guys to see women swallowing every bit of their cum after a blow job, so that's supposed to be hot. But in this story, she's not visible to him in the other booth so he can't know whether she swallowed. The mistake happpened because you don't pay strict attention to your p;oint of view. You need to always be asking whose head are we in right now, so you don't tell us things we can't know until you set it up. cheers!
How are you sure?
In such encounters, how are you sure you will not contact ------?
hot
Wow I love the plot I hope it continues after all it is a week long vacation and she does seem like a hot little thing
More!
Really enjoyed your story but was hoping for additional chapters... Perhaps revealing her secret after many other trips to gloryhole?
stupid story
What a let down. Maybe next time use your imagination. Story reqlly sucked
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