All Comments on 'Stacy's Training'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
awesome

can't wait to read about here deflowering

Kerina_SmithKerina_Smithover 14 years ago
SAme ole same ol

Why must so many nonconsent/reluctance writer feel they need to make the girl turn into a willing participant? It just speaks of a lazy unoriginal writer, who is not committed to their genre. You ought to try childrens cartoons, you are too soft for this sort of thing sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Poorly written, full of contextual mistakes. You clearly have never had a slave to train in your entire life

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mildly disappointing.

Find a muse, train them, use the experience to draw from when writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good but

Just my personal preference but I'm in love with Stacy's mom more. She's just got it going on.

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