by Thanatos_X13
Why must so many nonconsent/reluctance writer feel they need to make the girl turn into a willing participant? It just speaks of a lazy unoriginal writer, who is not committed to their genre. You ought to try childrens cartoons, you are too soft for this sort of thing sorry.
Poorly written, full of contextual mistakes. You clearly have never had a slave to train in your entire life
Find a muse, train them, use the experience to draw from when writing.
Just my personal preference but I'm in love with Stacy's mom more. She's just got it going on.