Please keep going! My only beef is a few small spelling errors; shudder is not spelled with two t's. Grab a dictionary or even better, get a good editor. Thanks for your hard work!
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Anonymous12/22/08
Nice story
It was a nice story, but noticed that you changed his eye color. The first time you said he had blue eyes, then later you said he had golden brown eyes. you need to carefully proof read, or have someone else read it to check for errors.I am looking forward to the next installment.
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Love it!
Please keep going! My only beef is a few small spelling errors; shudder is not spelled with two t's. Grab a dictionary or even better, get a good editor. Thanks for your hard work!
Nice story
It was a nice story, but noticed that you changed his eye color. The first time you said he had blue eyes, then later you said he had golden brown eyes. you need to carefully proof read, or have someone else read it to check for errors.I am looking forward to the next installment.
wow I mean WOW
Love to have ssome Charley. Will you continue this story....They can go far. Really look forward to it. Thanks for wring a very hot story..
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