All Comments on 'Thackery Manor'

Not too shabby. I rather liked it.

If she's Lady Madeline Thackery, she can't be Mrs Thackery or Lady Thackery: the three titles are incompatible with each other.

If he's Lord Edmund Thackery he's the younger son of a duke or marquess, so he can't be a lord and can't sit in the House of Lords. And you don't 'serve' in the House of Lords.

And if it's a London house, it's not a manor.