All Comments on 'A Surprise for John'

WOW that felt great. I can't wait to read what else happens to johnny now that he has decided to be the Bitch.

very nice story...liked it a lot. Keep them coming.

But that is sonme sick ass shit!

My wife is doing the same to me right now...I have to do anything she says and I love it...taking a big strap on is the ultimate when you love giving up control to your woman.

I enjoyed your story, but when you don't proofread and correct your writing a reader may easily get the impression that you didn't because you thought so little of it. I can understand an occasional spelling error -- though there are spellcheck programs -- but to omit whole words implies carelessness, and hurts a story's needed sense of inevitability. If YOU don't care enough about your story, why should the reader? Readers want reciprocity, the sense that you care sufficiently about them.

"It ain't what you say /

It's the way how you say it. /

You say love me, baby, /

And I have to obey it."

IF YOU HAD DISLIKED IT YOU WOULD HAVE STOPPED

You go dog! Don't have to be bi to luv playin with your woman! Most women don't even have a clue!

`Muah

Oh my! I wish my wife would make me her bitch

Great story. Right to the point. I would love to have this done to me.

I had read many stoires but there are very les stories where the woman would ask the male to call her "daddy". Hope u can publish more stories like this bro. So hot and erotic