Sorry , but as soon as the "hero" plays with a 10" cock it switches me off, and you put it so early in the story I didn`t bother with the rest.
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Anonymous12/23/08
Well then 10 inch and then black you ruined
what could have been an erotic story. Who cares if it is 7 or 10 inches? And what difference does being black make? If the woman is attracted she is attracted if she isnt being black will just make her run yelling to the cops. Try writing without using stereotypes and pulling in gut responses.
I stopped reading at 10" cock, cause everybody on here has a 10" cock and if you take a 100 men naked in a room at random - you just might find one that has a 10"er.!! Get real.! 44DD Tits & 10"in/er just don't cut it.!! Not all of us like John Holmes & Dolly Parton.
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Sorry , but as soon as the "hero" plays with a 10" cock it switches me off, and you put it so early in the story I didn`t bother with the rest.
Well then 10 inch and then black you ruined
what could have been an erotic story. Who cares if it is 7 or 10 inches? And what difference does being black make? If the woman is attracted she is attracted if she isnt being black will just make her run yelling to the cops. Try writing without using stereotypes and pulling in gut responses.
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I stopped reading at 10" cock, cause everybody on here has a 10" cock and if you take a 100 men naked in a room at random - you just might find one that has a 10"er.!! Get real.! 44DD Tits & 10"in/er just don't cut it.!! Not all of us like John Holmes & Dolly Parton.
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