All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Best Story

Please finish the story line its great and well written.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 15 years ago
OMG!

No sex in 2 chapters and I'm hard as a brick reading it. I'm really gonna enjoy this series. Thanks for starting it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Best story this year

this is the best story I have read this year. Thanks.Keep it comming

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Just super hot !

I have been waiting so long for such a story !

And so well written.

Keep it going !

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i cant read anymore

The way the dialogue flows makes me want to die. I assume it probably gets better as the story progresses but I don't want to risk investing any more time in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

God the dynamic is really weird, I hope we get some explanation as to why the parents are so... Hmmm with their children. Its interesting amusing, but i hope it's justified

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I agree with the last comments. The dialogue and the flow was weird, especially in the first chapter. I'm not sure if I want to follow it further or not.

wagonet2wagonet2about 4 years ago
deftly done

Somehow our hero has 3 women again. pity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

One of the best teases ever!

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Chapter 48 submitted 8/16

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