All Comments on 'My Brother's Magnificent Cock Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not very good

not to believable you expect us to believe that they share a room and bathroom and cuddled at night but she never saw or felt anything not likely this read like a first draft not a finished story get an editor and do a rewrite

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
It's time that he made his sister a real woman

He should take her, show her what it feels to be filled with young hard cock. They could become each other's fuck toy, and never have to look outside if the family for love and sexual relief. Her little pussy might be sore for a while, but that is what makes a real woman, being able to take cock even if her pussy is sore.Thanks for the good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Repeat Repeat!!!!

Of about 1000 other storys has covered this. Do something new. Good Luck!

spearman1spearman1over 14 years ago
Good Start!!

Very good start!!

DarkhogDarkhogabout 12 years ago
A good beginning

This story is taking it's time for a great build up to mad passionate love making. I understand where the author is going with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great

great story love to see what happen next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sucking bro

I love sucking my brothers cock. He was first

Cock in me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
She Likes his Weapon

Thus is a great description of what its like when your sister likes your Cock

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Another Multiple Part Flash Story?****

Good short read. Thanks for sharing.

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