those who criticise behind the veil of annonymity, never..NEVER... have anything useful to say.. the story isn't perfect(but then you're not submitting it for a nobel prize for literature).. it has good pace, balance and is not overloaded with puerile adjectives... and if the author leaves the readers wanting more.. it isn't such a bad thing... thanks for the story... please may we have some more?
"My neighbor and her girl friends watched me jerk off. They sat in front of me and watched me jerk off and cum. They liked it. I could hear them talking about me and laughing as they watched me beating off, so I jerked off in front of them three times. Each time I came real hard. They watched me cum and it felt great. They were all gorgeous brunettes. I loved it :)"
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those who criticise behind the veil of annonymity, never..NEVER... have anything useful to say.. the story isn't perfect(but then you're not submitting it for a nobel prize for literature).. it has good pace, balance and is not overloaded with puerile adjectives... and if the author leaves the readers wanting more.. it isn't such a bad thing... thanks for the story... please may we have some more?
I love to watch
I felt as if I were right there with you. Let's hear what happened next.
Have you a webcam?
I'd love to watch you doing it!
Glenn Willis Masturbates
"My neighbor and her girl friends watched me jerk off. They sat in front of me and watched me jerk off and cum. They liked it. I could hear them talking about me and laughing as they watched me beating off, so I jerked off in front of them three times. Each time I came real hard. They watched me cum and it felt great. They were all gorgeous brunettes. I loved it :)"
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