All Comments on 'Stephen and the Girl'

This one got me pretty hot with its slow progression and build-up. Your characters seem so real, I feel like I know them. I know I want to be Stephen. :)

Kurt

Poor Stephen, not a good BoyScout - be prepared for the unexpected.! LOL That was one 'hot' story and for a change on here - small breast and cute pixie type and horny to boot. What more could you ask for.? '5' & a 100 for this one.

Really enjoyed it. It also leaves an opening for a chapter 2 that would be delightful if you chose to write it.

I liked the story but I'm wondering why the chick didn't tell Stephen her name. Bummer! Anyway, the story was a bit long and could have done with a bit of editing for superfloruous content, but was still quite hot and entertaining. Kudos, author!