All Comments on 'A Dark and Stormy Night'

Very simple, short and straight forward story. I really get aroused. It is a good read.

Very well done. Steamy reading is perfect.

Very well done. Steamy reading is perfect.

Really enjoyable. Room for a chapter 2 when she goes to college.

A sweet young naive girl with a tight pussy, what more could a guy ask for. It looks like she will be going to school with her belly full of his kid though. Which is alright, she will just have to take a semester off to have the kid.Thanks for the good story....Rich

So sweet and tasty , who could blame him . Very well told.

A very well written story. I just discovered this authors work and am overjoyed to see that I have dozens of stories yet to be enjoyed and I hope more will be forthcoming on a regular basis.

Great for a quick read.

not real good reads more like it should be chapter two of a series and needs another chapter to finish it off either start at the begining and go forward or don't start at all.

half a story is worse than no story and this was less than half.

it's good, keep up the work !

That's what big brothers are for, caring for and teaching their little sisters!

Nice little stroke piece. Could be part of a series but fine as a stand alone.

Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

it was my step daughter that was frightened of thunder, she got in bed with me and her mother between us, spooning with her she pushed her ass back against me, i moved back and she followed, dropping her hand between us she felt my cock, i whispered to stop it, she continued, minutes later and constantly telling her no, her mother said

"For Gods sake, just fuck her and let me go back to sleep"

after that i fucked my step daughter as much mother