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Velvet Chains Ch. 03

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by Anonymous01/02/09

Really Loving this!

I like the fact that Cain seems very in control and dominating but at the same time he isn't being 'mean'. It seems like he really does genuinely like Anise and that to me at least is the key. I could see a really intense relationship happening here with deep feelings and emotions developing as well. Great writing!

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by libertarian01/07/09

chapter 4?

I really do look forward to a chapter 4,5, and 6. I love the BDSM aspects of this romance and want to see how the velvet chains are completely attached to Cain's pet.

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by MINKX01/15/09

Nice little story

I'd suggest a little work on the dialogue, but it was an enjoyable read, worth the time.
And oh, have you ever seen the movie The Secretary? Amazing movie!

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