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Wow!
This was a very powerful first chapter! A little difficult to follow in the beginning but beautifully written none the less. I hope you plan on continuing this.
Encouragement...
Wonderful setting, and with rich potential for development. War and upheaval make for powerfully dramatic story backdrops. Push on!
amazing
this is an amazing story! Keep on writing
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