by Surrendering
I won't say it hasn't been done before. But I doubt it has been done better.
The barbarism is what jagged me, that plus the choice the girl was offered, not much of a choice, admittedly.
As a side-issue, I thought police officers travelled in pairs, or is that in the next instalment.
Cheers, and Thanks,
Kilroy
I hope she gets him back and takes all of those bastards out. Pay back is a bitch!
consider submitting longer pieces-- not short pieces that end with part two coming soon.
develop more, show more, detail more.
Omg this could be an amazing series! I cant wait for part teo i hope this is a long and degrading series!