All Comments on 'Sheriff's New Girlfriend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yeah Good Tale.

I won't say it hasn't been done before. But I doubt it has been done better.

The barbarism is what jagged me, that plus the choice the girl was offered, not much of a choice, admittedly.

As a side-issue, I thought police officers travelled in pairs, or is that in the next instalment.

Cheers, and Thanks,

Kilroy

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice

Can't wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Waiting for the next part

I hope she gets him back and takes all of those bastards out. Pay back is a bitch!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
master shake

consider submitting longer pieces-- not short pieces that end with part two coming soon.

develop more, show more, detail more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

Omg this could be an amazing series! I cant wait for part teo i hope this is a long and degrading series!

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