Very good story, but too much like "Words on skin", despite the differences. Very enjoyable to read, and very good finish.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Very Nice story loved ever page keep up the good work and loved how the title and the plot line revolved around each other.
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Anonymous01/20/17
Now,Sir,you exceed yourself
I went contrary to the more obvious order and came here after reading Words on Skin(and as you may gather,I've read both in course of a single night),however it has paid me better.Now it seems I can admire both stories in the aspects they excel individually.Not that there is any element missing in either,it just happens that Words on Skin deals better with the affection as this does with conscience ;and a deserved mention that both excel in plot ,deception and brilliance.
While it was a little evident,as to the mystery,in WoS; it absolutely gave away no shade of the mystery it had concealed right till the end in this story.
To write a script with as much wit,subtlety and brilliance would prompt me to put you next in line to Quentin Tarantino (Mind you,it is an honour).
However,the one thing I wish report against you is that it should have been tunny who took her virginity and not that mechanical piece.
Now,Sir,it has been an honour to read your works,however delayed might have been my arrival,allow me to take leave.
This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com signing off.
PS - You may recall some comments from WoS later.
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Anonymous01/21/17
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Jesus. Christ. My... my feelings.. Why do I feel this way?!?
That was absolutely my favorite erotic short story to date.
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Anonymous02/04/17
Even more feels.
I also came here just after finishing Words on Skin. Tears had already welled, by the end of this story they had begun to fall. Some may say so what, but here's my point.
1. Not a crier. Usually the death of loved ones do it but not much else.
2. I'm a man. We have smaller tear ducts and larger canals than women. So it is physically harder for tears to fall for us.
And 3. I'm very cerebral and can be stone faced at times.
While I can admit to liking chick flicks, none of them had the same effect as a couple of short stories, that's a testament to your writing. Thanks.
... reading this one, and it seems to have been better than the first time. Yeah, it was like Words on Skin, but still really good in it's own right.
Jess was a devious little shit, wasn't she? But she knew exactly what she wanted, and got it. And, as she said, nobody got hurt. Sometimes love hurts, but not in this case.
I liked it alot, and I know I'll be reading it again.
English
My go to story
When I can't find a good story I always come back to this and Words on Skin. I wish PF would write more along these lines. One can wish.
TBC
One of a kind
So sensual, so erotic. Even if it wasn't incest it would still feel taboo. You are a damn good writer Paco.
Thank you.
Great story
Very good story, but too much like "Words on skin", despite the differences. Very enjoyable to read, and very good finish.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
I like it.
A hymen isn't just a flesh wall though.
Loved It!
Very Nice story loved ever page keep up the good work and loved how the title and the plot line revolved around each other.
Now,Sir,you exceed yourself
I went contrary to the more obvious order and came here after reading Words on Skin(and as you may gather,I've read both in course of a single night),however it has paid me better.Now it seems I can admire both stories in the aspects they excel individually.Not that there is any element missing in either,it just happens that Words on Skin deals better with the affection as this does with conscience ;and a deserved mention that both excel in plot ,deception and brilliance.
While it was a little evident,as to the mystery,in WoS; it absolutely gave away no shade of the mystery it had concealed right till the end in this story.
To write a script with as much wit,subtlety and brilliance would prompt me to put you next in line to Quentin Tarantino (Mind you,it is an honour).
However,the one thing I wish report against you is that it should have been tunny who took her virginity and not that mechanical piece.
Now,Sir,it has been an honour to read your works,however delayed might have been my arrival,allow me to take leave.
This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com signing off.
PS - You may recall some comments from WoS later.
...
Jesus. Christ. My... my feelings.. Why do I feel this way?!?
That was absolutely my favorite erotic short story to date.
Even more feels.
I also came here just after finishing Words on Skin. Tears had already welled, by the end of this story they had begun to fall. Some may say so what, but here's my point.
1. Not a crier. Usually the death of loved ones do it but not much else.
2. I'm a man. We have smaller tear ducts and larger canals than women. So it is physically harder for tears to fall for us.
And 3. I'm very cerebral and can be stone faced at times.
While I can admit to liking chick flicks, none of them had the same effect as a couple of short stories, that's a testament to your writing. Thanks.
Second time ...
... reading this one, and it seems to have been better than the first time. Yeah, it was like Words on Skin, but still really good in it's own right.
Jess was a devious little shit, wasn't she? But she knew exactly what she wanted, and got it. And, as she said, nobody got hurt. Sometimes love hurts, but not in this case.
I liked it alot, and I know I'll be reading it again.
Thanks!
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