Defending the Enemy Ch. 02

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WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN lol. I can't wait to see who did the murder and these two are smokin' together!

Way too short!!!

About Time! ;) This story has great sex, broken taboos, relationship intrigue, and criminal drama that would make a great Law and Order + SVU crossover. It is a great yarn and I hope that it goes on for many more chapters. I only wish it wasn't so long between them although I understand life happens :) keep up the great work!

Wow- when do we get MORE !!!!!!!!!!

So erotc ,the sex between them is wild and unbrilded!! Don't listen to the idiots out there ,that don't like it,too bad or them. Pleas continue !!!!!! Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

i agree

way to short! can't wait to read more soon

This is....

This is pretty a cool story. Hopeful there will be more from you.

Garbage

An Attorney who would fuck a man who hang her brother? Yeah, ok. I see why white folks still call us niggers. This is without a doubt, the DUMBEST story ever composed.

This is a great story! Keep going!

I love this story and the way it is coming together. Remember one important thing. You can't please everyone. Those that hate your story are free not to read it. Write your story because you love it and there are those of us that want more!

People open up your horizons and realize your small corner of the world isn't the whole world. You don't know others experiences so you cannot say whether this could happen or not or have the right to call it stupid!

I also commend you on taking on this difficult subject. I know from experience that someone that has a prejudice against a certain type of people can learn to love someone that is that type and still maintain alot of that anger.

I know someone currently married (going on 25+ years) that dealt with this very same issue. Only reversed.

Sorry to get all wordy...but don't let anyone stop you from writing this tale down!

HOT!

Keep writing.

its about time

reading your store was grate if moore ppl would right like you it mite make it a lot easyer to find other ppl that would like to make the world a nicer place to live in

MORE PLEASSSE!

OMG.. What an interesting twist. I loved it and can't wait for the next installment. I hope it's soon.

OMG!!!!!

"Lady in the streets and a whore in the sheets." I love this stroy. Keep going!!!

GREAT

Im hooked please write more

great...

i wish there were lot of stories like this because then there wouldn't be dumb comments. I like the way the story is progressing. Keep it up.

GREAT!!!!!!

Can't wait to read the finished product

OMG... are you gonna finish the story? You can't just leave us hanging like that!?1

I love your story, please finish!!!

UMMM

this is sorta of disturbing, but what is worse is your continuous incorrect use of exclamation marks in every sentence! perhaps you should get an editor.

Who is speaking?

I fully agree with the other reader, half of the time I am very uncertain who is saying what to whom! The use of all the names after each other is very confusing, to say the least! And the story is a bit unrealistic, first the white boy hates all other non-white people and at the same time he succumbs very fast and easily to Margie!

Now I hope you will continue the story a bit faster than other authors, it is not fun to have to read every chapter all over again to remember what is/was happening!

sexxy!!! me likey

ithink white men sexin black women is HOTT!! i know i'm not alone

Continues

This needs a little tightening up with the proper use of verbs, adjectives, predicates etc. Keep writing.

I like it ....

a lot I think you should keep writing. It has been awhile since you put anything up please make haste. This is a really interesting story so far and I would like to read more!

love it!!

Ur doing a great job!!! Forget all da comments from the english teachers!!! Lol...please keep writing

Go ahead "Halle Berry"

Give him some of your money, too. You do realize Loverboy's racist comments are directed at your nephews, cousins, Dad, Grandad....You were on Slave row praying for Massa's visits, huh? Straightening your hair has completely torched your brain cells?

But just keep allowing your cunt to do the thinking. Speaking for this Black Man, who needs you?

Herman

is there more

love it

more

love your story hope theres more to come

F. U. SHANGO!

Don't let the HATERS get to you! You are a writer, and as such, you will always find others that will hate you or your body of work. Remember those are the same people who can not string 7 words together to make a complete sentence. PEOPLE THIS IS FICTION!!!!!!!! A STORY!!!!!! And for all the haters out there, remember what Cee Lo Green said........, F.U.!!!!!!!!

x

When I first read this story I thought maybe English was your second language. Then I realized maybe there are just lots of typos it happens to the best of us. I think you have a talent but you need an editor. It has nothing to do with hating its just an observation. Your writing is a reflection of you and its one of the most personal gifts you can give; and so wouldn't you want ot present yourself in the best possible way.

Duuude!!

I must say, in spite of the various typos, your story is highly enjoyable and entertaining! I myself am a white guy who loves ladies of the darker complexion. I fully support your writing stories like this. Keep it up! :-)

Moorrreeee

Hope theres a chapter 3

Good Story

Good story; I am wondering who is making those phone calls to Margie. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

C.O.N.T.I.N.U.E.

We understand that when your feeling the urge to jot down a story it just pours out as words. But you must put it in proper form so the reader can understand and enjoy your creativity. Don't shy away. Thanks for sharing

WOW !!!

Okay so I just re read this whole story again . You gotta update soon . This is such a good story . I demand more soon. :)

Yes, we definitely need an update!! Story is getting good!

oh my goodness

I am craving chapter 3!!!!

I need more

I understand you may be busy, but please have some pity on us. This is really good.

So...

Are you gonna finish ch.3?

Update Please

Its been a few years you think its time for a update

Me likey

I really hate the racist slant of this story but damn it's good!! Who is trying to set up Cole and why? Why does he trust these people? Please come back and finish this story.

Glad I read the comments first

This is what I don't like, that people sometimes never finish a story. Some have 4 or 5 stories that have sat unfinished for over a year. I know life happens, but there are too many stories on Lit unfinished for it to be all about life. Most times I think the author can't figure out where to take the story and leave it unfinished or lose interest. Sometimes they're really good stories too. I didn't read this one, so I can't say on this. I wouldn't hold my breath waiting for it to be finished.

*sigh*

I'm getting real tired of these really good, but unfinished stories.

to *sigh*

Then go and pay for a finished book. .. These guys are giving us their free raw material. ..I will always gladly and gratefully wait patiently for their work. ... Special thanks to the writers and this website

my thoughts

You need to do another chapter. I need to know who is framing him and why. I also need to know if they stay together.

What a fabulous story. The plot the sex everything is hottttttt