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Good First Story
Well done. You definitely can write and did a good job of describing the masturbation scene. Now, let's see what's in those naughtiest grooves.
Good #1
#1 in my book.!! Can't wait for the next story to see where this goes.! Thanks.
Great start
A wonderful first effort. I was disappointed in its brevity, but hope that further chapters will slake my thirst for more. I shall be checking back regularly for more by you. Thanks for this contribution.
Great start
For a new writer, I think your story is really well written, it flowed and carried me along with it. Well done. :)
Can't wait to read other stories off you.
Wow!!
I'm usually not into toys and masturbation stories but you still managed to pull me right into this story. Bravo!! This was so well written. Thank you I can't wait for your next submittion.
Great!
I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for Chapter 2!
Again very good.
You describe things very well. I take it you enjoy writeing about such things? well please continue to give us the pleasure of your writing.
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