All Comments on 'The Babysitter's Surprise'

This seems to be your first submission and it was a graet start. Try to develop more of a story line since it all came together much too fast.

A very fine first effort. Keep up the good work!

Perhaps she not only wanted to fuck her charge's Daddy, but she wanted to have his baby, also? This story has all sorts of possibilities, including the babysitter having the Daddy's baby and then moving in for a 3-way with the Daddy, Mommy and herself, so the Daddy could continue fucking her "shooting" siblings to this first baby while he is also fucking his wife. And in the long run, that first baby could have been born with a cock so that when he grew up, he could begin making babies with the wife, also?

Just some good possibilities here....

The fast and the furious has nothing on you. It was fast, hot and wild. Good work. Keep the stories coming! No pun intended (LOL)!!

Please don't stop there...keep going. That was so HOT! Please add another chapter or two.

Wrote my first comment but it didn't take, so I do it again :) Anyway, I felt your story here is the ultimate and hope you write more and more. I feel you imagination is by far above and you are well on your way! I also felt like I was part of the story and this interest I wanted more! As I was reading I also sensed your user name and that too drove my interest even stronger. Maybe next time you could add a bit more personal information into your Bio and maybe even a picture. Thanks and good luck.

Thank you to those of you that are leaving comments. This is the first story I have ever written and I was quite nervous about submitting it. Look for part 2 to come out soon. I submitted it this evening. Again thanks for your comments they really help.

For a first time story you not only got a '5' but also a 100 and I thought the story was great and I am looking to see where you take this for us.! Thanks.

I liked the way you described the sex scenes, and the storyline is super. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Very erotic. Maybe in future chapters she will get pregnant by him?

A babysitter's Heaven.

Seriously, the contraction of "you are" is "you're".

Your use of the word “ cunt” made this hot story even HOTTER !!.