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by Anonymous01/07/09

good beginning!

A bit short by itself, but this chapter has the potential of starting a very entertaining story. I am hoping that you have the next several portions already written.
-- KK in Texas

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by Anonymous01/07/09

interesting

Well it is an interesting start to a story but there isn't much romance in it yet kind of a bad place to leave off almost like you started the story and stopped before it could get going.

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by Anonymous02/12/09

More please

Please submit next installment.....

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by Anonymous11/27/10

plzwrite

PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M DYING

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