by hushhh
Well written but tooo short..
haven't seen any added chapters????????
Just checked it's your first writtings...Well I suggest you making them longer......
So tell us some more of this stunning older woman....Rich
Fairly decent start, but it's half a story. complete storys have an actual ending. This one was left hanging.
It's a good start hope you add to it.I like the ending, leaves it open for alot of options.Just a idea, you should have Chris's mom slowly become Dan's "bitch"/sex slave.Thats just a thought it is YOUR story you can take it anywhere you want to. Hope you keep writing.Like they say about Teachers, practice makes perfect.
More please, this is a good start, but would like to know more! Does he get anywhere, does the brother/son get involved, and how about the sister? Loads more fun to come I hope!
OK. So, the kid runs out of his friends house, stammering about being sick. He wasn't sick, he was overcome with his horniness that, he probably went home and really got off a good one. Need to continue with this story.