All Comments on 'A Classmate's MILF'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Too short

Well written but tooo short..

haven't seen any added chapters????????

Just checked it's your first writtings...Well I suggest you making them longer......

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago

Don't be a tease. Where is the payoff?

coo coo cachoo Mrs. Robinson...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
Well, you got my curiosity up

So tell us some more of this stunning older woman....Rich

midnightdeathwritermidnightdeathwriterover 15 years ago
Good start but incomplete

Fairly decent start, but it's half a story. complete storys have an actual ending. This one was left hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good start

It's a good start hope you add to it.I like the ending, leaves it open for alot of options.Just a idea, you should have Chris's mom slowly become Dan's "bitch"/sex slave.Thats just a thought it is YOUR story you can take it anywhere you want to. Hope you keep writing.Like they say about Teachers, practice makes perfect.

foldedpaperfoldedpaperover 14 years ago
And.....?

More please, this is a good start, but would like to know more! Does he get anywhere, does the brother/son get involved, and how about the sister? Loads more fun to come I hope!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
And ... ?

So, where is this going ?

Started well but

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

So where's the rest of your story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

i agree i want more

LeeclarkLeeclarkabout 8 years ago
More?

Is there more to come?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

OK. So, the kid runs out of his friends house, stammering about being sick. He wasn't sick, he was overcome with his horniness that, he probably went home and really got off a good one. Need to continue with this story.

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