I liked this storey very much. I could sense the private thoughts and the salcious intrigue of 'sneaking' a look. How about being able to stroke yourself knowing someone is very close and intently watching. Very well done as far as I am concerned. A criticism may be that it was too short. It got me to the point of wanting to but it was done. This did make me wonder, 'is there more'?
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Anonymous07/29/09
OMG!!!
You dirty little man!!! You should be ashamed of yourself for being such a pervert! If this story didn't make me so hot I would never read it again. You write very well and if you ever need an older woman to work out your fantasies with you may want to give me a chance. I would never admit it to anyone but I have had similar fantasies but from the other side.
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Watching and Being Watched at its Best
I liked this storey very much. I could sense the private thoughts and the salcious intrigue of 'sneaking' a look. How about being able to stroke yourself knowing someone is very close and intently watching. Very well done as far as I am concerned. A criticism may be that it was too short. It got me to the point of wanting to but it was done. This did make me wonder, 'is there more'?
OMG!!!
You dirty little man!!! You should be ashamed of yourself for being such a pervert! If this story didn't make me so hot I would never read it again. You write very well and if you ever need an older woman to work out your fantasies with you may want to give me a chance. I would never admit it to anyone but I have had similar fantasies but from the other side.
That was a hot one ...
That was a very hot tale. Looking forward to reading Chapter 2.
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