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All Comments on 'The Vampire's Lust'

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coffinbaitcoffinbaitover 15 years ago
a little confusing but a good start

This story was a little confusing since you kept switching from third person to first person through out and there were some grammar errors,but other then that good story I would have liked to see a little more buildup of the seduction

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