All Comments on 'My Niece'

Typical indian garbage rotten grammer, spelling, and use of words not known outside of their small localized area. Such junk should be removed and future stories required to be fully edited.

forget the criticism... your work is great but yeah it need little improvement..... cheers

Gave this three stars because I doubt it was written by an India man as there are too many poor referances. Next time recommend letting the audiance know that this is satiricle.

Please write about the Uncle fucking her pregnant pussy and drinking her breast milk.

You'd think that if you were going to criticize other people's work you'd know how to spell grammar.

What a tired old drab of a silly story with no substance and a common stupid recurring theme, lol!

There are not many stories on here of true non-consentual sex. Thank you for staying true to the genera.

you should definitely get your next story edited because this one wasn't very well written with typos that made the story seem like it had been written by a child. but you make up for it with the story truly sticking to the non-consent/reluctance genre.

wel it helped me cum lol well done

make the second part where lisa has the baby and she wants to have sex again and have another baby

I am confused. Why would this couple hire a baby-sitter if the dad was going to be home? Is that an Indian cultural thing?

Other than that, nice story. It needs a bit of an edit, but that's par for the course.

Abortion, cut uncles neck in his sleep after raping him with giant dildo and become gay, but i'm evil so haha.

There is much work to be done with this. A very hard read with errors. When an author pleads for support at the end of the story it is a BIG turn off.

Am I the only one who wondered why he thought he was "blessed" to only have a 7 in dick?

like......a lot of revision

Why'd he ring the doorbell for his own home and why would they need a 20 yr old babysitter if he's home

this is the most awful thing i've read in a while and i didn't get very far at all, just, bad, extremely so

Wow a WHOLE 7 INCHES. Indians must have tiny penises if that's something to brag about.

What a brave little man you are.

Plz do a second part.

what a fucking idiot, keep jerking off your 2 inches dipshit

LOL, I didn't know Hunter Biden wrote porn.

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LOL, I didn't know Hunter Biden wrote porn."

Ahhh a republican - all the thanks to your state-approved carer for telling you how to spell the hard words.