The bi-racial F/WM coupling is interesting, and well-written. Try to find an editor for the next installment. This was rushed and could have been longer. Take the time for character development. How old are they? What is the narrator's name? What color is her hair? etc.
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Anonymous01/14/09
i hate teaser stories!
even tho I gave this a 100, I HATE these tease stories, please disclose that at the begining if your going to do it!
I really hope you plan on continuing their story. You did an excellent job of creating believable and likeable characters. The sexual tension between them was great. More...soon.
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Anonymous01/14/09
Wow! Hot, Hot, Hot
Soooo sexy, please add t sptoryww, cannot wait to read what happens next.
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Anonymous01/20/09
Great Start....Please Continue
Great Story. Please continue, I would like to see what ultimately happens between these two.
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Anonymous02/04/12
I want more
Are you going to continue this? You left it open and I want more
i am actually working on this story now, with every intention of continuing it and posting updates very soon. thanks so much for the encouragement, after all this time.
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Anonymous07/01/12
Whoa*****
What are friends for indeed. My gawd, dat taxi groping was hoooot
English
ohhhh
yum yum please don't stop more soon!
Please continue
Please continue with this story, I can hardly wait to read more.
Good potential - interesting couple
The bi-racial F/WM coupling is interesting, and well-written. Try to find an editor for the next installment. This was rushed and could have been longer. Take the time for character development. How old are they? What is the narrator's name? What color is her hair? etc.
i hate teaser stories!
even tho I gave this a 100, I HATE these tease stories, please disclose that at the begining if your going to do it!
Fabulous story...
I really hope you plan on continuing their story. You did an excellent job of creating believable and likeable characters. The sexual tension between them was great. More...soon.
Wow! Hot, Hot, Hot
Soooo sexy, please add t sptoryww, cannot wait to read what happens next.
Great Start....Please Continue
Great Story. Please continue, I would like to see what ultimately happens between these two.
I want more
Are you going to continue this? You left it open and I want more
yes, i do plan on finishing it
i am actually working on this story now, with every intention of continuing it and posting updates very soon. thanks so much for the encouragement, after all this time.
Whoa*****
What are friends for indeed. My gawd, dat taxi groping was hoooot
confused?
Was anyone else confused in the beginning?
yes, there was confusion
But, that might have been an intentional misdirection by the author.
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