All Comments on 'Chuck! Fuck Ch. 02'

by Sensa8

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blikstblikstover 15 years ago
Good read.

It was good chapter although the sex scenes ended a bit sudden. I don't mind short sex scenes but a little better transision would be good.

Otherwise a good exhiting story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I agree

thanks for that comment. Upon re-reading this chapter, I completely agree. They end way too abrupt and I'm gonna fix it.

-Sensa8

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
MORE!~!

MORE !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please start writing again. This is great.

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