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by Anonymous

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by normal jean01/12/09

hey Suzie!

I didn't really LOVE it, but it isn't bad, but def not a 5, but to assure you I am not your one- bomber, here is a 5 from me. Good luck with your writing.

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by Anonymous01/12/09

Few words, big impact

Such a tiny poem but it conveys so much sadness. The love and despair and longing shine through.

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by vampiredust01/12/09

Poignant

Concise and poignant. Loved it.

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by UnderYourSpell01/13/09

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Bittersweet

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by WickedEve01/15/09

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This is a good poem and this part is great: orgasmic genetic similarities. I think the last line really detracts from the poem.

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