but the name change was a bit confusing. previous chapters it was Dylan and now its Alec. Apart from that good writing and i hope to read more from u soon.
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Anonymous01/14/09
More please
Loved it but you need to go back and edit to change Alec back to Dylan the way it was in previous chapters. Everytime I read Alec it took me away from the story.
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Anonymous02/26/09
Finally!
Your continuing the story, but why the name change? Please write more some, I love thee stories you write
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Anonymous06/04/09
hmmm
i really liked this story but when you switched Dylan to Alec i got confused and every time i read Alec i started thinking about how the name change was dumb and so it took away from the story so it was really hard to concentrate.
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Anonymous01/03/10
goood
it was really good, and i enjoyed the story that went along and that it was not just sex. the story was left unfinished though, as she never found out his intentions of marrying her. also, as with the previous comments, the name change in the last chapter was a bit confusin.
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Anonymous01/07/11
amazing
more please!!
but why does dylan's name change to alec?
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Anonymous05/17/14
Dylan or Alec?
why is the guys name Dylan in the first 3 chapters, but in this chapter he is called Alec? It really messes with the story, since you end up going back and forth to figure out if you missed out on something.
English
Good to see u back...
but the name change was a bit confusing. previous chapters it was Dylan and now its Alec. Apart from that good writing and i hope to read more from u soon.
More please
Loved it but you need to go back and edit to change Alec back to Dylan the way it was in previous chapters. Everytime I read Alec it took me away from the story.
Finally!
Your continuing the story, but why the name change? Please write more some, I love thee stories you write
hmmm
i really liked this story but when you switched Dylan to Alec i got confused and every time i read Alec i started thinking about how the name change was dumb and so it took away from the story so it was really hard to concentrate.
goood
it was really good, and i enjoyed the story that went along and that it was not just sex. the story was left unfinished though, as she never found out his intentions of marrying her. also, as with the previous comments, the name change in the last chapter was a bit confusin.
amazing
more please!!
but why does dylan's name change to alec?
Dylan or Alec?
why is the guys name Dylan in the first 3 chapters, but in this chapter he is called Alec? It really messes with the story, since you end up going back and forth to figure out if you missed out on something.
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