All Comments on 'Watching'

Great start to what could and I hope will be a good series, plenty of scope to take this story a number of ways.

brilliant hot horny story. reading this was like being there watch her being fuck first by one man then taken by many. awesome story can't wait to read the next part, such a real turn on very exciting to read this story.

Starting at about the 11th paragraph, you lost me...how many times can you repeat "the boy"? Disturbing.