Those another good Chapter About Hero and Heather, Samantha. I like how you brought the story back around to where he was with the two women that he lost his virginity to. I hope you write next chapter soon so we can hear about Tracy losing her virginity to Hero.
Hmm I wonder how many more women we need is 4 enough? lol.
The story is progressing as an excruciatingly slow pace. 4 hot woman and poor hero cant get laid what the hell? Poor hero if he ends up having to satisfy all those beautiful women at once. Hopefully Tracy stays for awhile or at least return often. Wonderful job I can't wait to see how it turns out.
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Another Good Chapter!!
Those another good Chapter About Hero and Heather, Samantha. I like how you brought the story back around to where he was with the two women that he lost his virginity to. I hope you write next chapter soon so we can hear about Tracy losing her virginity to Hero.
Dont Quit now
your doing so well with this story!
Getting there
For pullthestring - I haven't given up. I'm struggling with the next chapter. Almost over the errr... hump.
Enough girls yet?
Hmm I wonder how many more women we need is 4 enough? lol.
The story is progressing as an excruciatingly slow pace. 4 hot woman and poor hero cant get laid what the hell? Poor hero if he ends up having to satisfy all those beautiful women at once. Hopefully Tracy stays for awhile or at least return often. Wonderful job I can't wait to see how it turns out.
hot
Getting hotter :)
aussies don't actually say crikey.
Crikey, are you sure?
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