All Comments on 'Camping Ch. 03'

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Jade1Tiger7Jade1Tiger7about 15 years ago
Keep It Coming

Please continue with this story it is very beautiful and simply told. I like the fact that it doesn't have all the bells and whistles that other wolf stories seem to have. However I would appreciate it if you did take the time to correct the spelling and grammar errors. It makes the reading go much smoother and faster if you don't have to correct the sentences as you read them to make sure you understand what is happening.

Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
continue plz

please continue i would like to here if xander and anjulie have the babies or puppies hehe good story keep going plz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
more, more please!!!

please continue!!!I want to know what type of babies or puppies they have and if xander goes back to become alpha!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More

please continue!

ushergalushergalalmost 15 years ago
more more

it can't end like that there has to be more to it

Heavenly_gurl09Heavenly_gurl09almost 15 years ago
More, i need more

Talk about a cliffhanger, i need more of this story. please dont end it like that. what happens next?Im waiting for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please continue

Please continue this story. I want to know more.

CalaharaCalaharaabout 14 years ago
Wonderful

pls write more,does she have puppies or babies? Does Xander take the pack. There is still so much more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I agree with Calahara

You need to write more chapters. This is a good story that only has the potential to get better.

ushergalushergalalmost 14 years ago
is there more?

not to add pressure or anything but I have been waiting for a while for the new story If there is going to be one please just put me out of my mesery and say if there is going to continue or not please say so

katgoddesskatgoddessalmost 14 years ago
Write more!

I would love to see how these characters handle this situation.

canndcanndover 13 years ago

I really liked how you handled him talking to the dad. Is there more to the story? I hope you will be finishing it. I was hoping her memory would come back when they made love. I really want to know what happens next

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Will you finish this story or

will you be leaving us guessing how it ends up!

bearmad1963bearmad1963over 13 years ago
Please Finish This Story

This story is good. Please write the next chapter. Don't leave it here.

devilcowgurl6devilcowgurl6almost 13 years ago
please finish the story!

I really wanna kno what happens the them, does he accept being alpha with her by his side? if its babies or pups, and what happens with her family!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hey, are they werewolf babies, or JUST wolves, or JUST humans? Eh? AND WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER, HUH?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
dude...

where's the rest?

;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

good story keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
want more!

this is really good and i want to read the rest! =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful story!

I would love it if you could finish this story, I love it so far!

savrose10savrose10almost 8 years ago
Please Update

I love this story so much, I must have reread it a hundred times now since you first posted it. I really wish you'd update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

This is a really good story. I hope that you continue it. I want to know if it's babies or puppies.

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