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Lovely
I enjoyed reading this. A lovely recollection told with concise, sharp language.
Vivid and Beautiful
Wow, I'm truly impressed to find this poem in such an unexpected place. It is beautiful and touches all the senses. Thank you for sharing it.
Nicely Done!
This poem was mentioned in today's new poem review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
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Loved this Tess a vivid picture of a place and time
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Oh, this poem is screaming to be submitted to a poetry ezine. It's damn good.
So sweet
and also so true--the way in which those memories hand around us like apple peel. Ty.
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