... between there, their, and they're? Look it up. It would definitely improve your writing.
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Anonymous01/16/09
Great part!
I kind of wish that John wasn't such a great guy because I don't want to see him get hurt but at the same time I want Cas & Gabe to finally get together too. You should have made John out to be some arrogant, self centered egotistical prick, lol!! Now someone has to get hurt and they both seem like great guys. Will be looking forward to the next part! Oh...and a bit longer chapters wouldn't hurt either!
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Anonymous01/16/09
Good start
Good story! Please proof for spelling and grammar mistakes as they are distracting.
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Anonymous05/12/13
More!
You're tearing me apart here! I like both their names and they both sound hot and they both seem like nice guys,except I can sense that Cassy and John... might not work out. More!
English
What's the difference
... between there, their, and they're? Look it up. It would definitely improve your writing.
Great part!
I kind of wish that John wasn't such a great guy because I don't want to see him get hurt but at the same time I want Cas & Gabe to finally get together too. You should have made John out to be some arrogant, self centered egotistical prick, lol!! Now someone has to get hurt and they both seem like great guys. Will be looking forward to the next part! Oh...and a bit longer chapters wouldn't hurt either!
Good start
Good story! Please proof for spelling and grammar mistakes as they are distracting.
More!
You're tearing me apart here! I like both their names and they both sound hot and they both seem like nice guys,except I can sense that Cassy and John... might not work out. More!
Such a shame
That this story has not been finished.
very frustrating
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