All Comments on 'Against Her Will'

Very poor story.

Don't get me wrong...I like nonconsent-reluctance as a genre. But this was a dreadful little tale. These stories can be entertaining and erotic when well written. Ths was neither.

good characterization given the short story format.

You are an idiot! And the story Sooo sucked ass!! Do us a favor stop writing! And hey I hope some asshole just like you really does give you herpes. You deserve them!

LOVE DA USE OF TEH HERP. THAT'S HOW IT'S USED IRL. NOTHING SAYS "LOYALTY" LIKE THE BITCH HAVING NO OTHER OPTIONS AFTER SHE GETS INFECTED.

KEEP ON TRUCKIN

really not sure what to say about this one... it was interesting at least. 4*

Now that's what I call revenge! Pity the victim had to die, but I'm tired of reading fics on this site where the rapist gets away with it!

I love NonConsent/Reluctance stories but this one sucked. These stories are about forcing someone to do something they don't want to do, not give them herpes or any permanent God awful disease. Your fucked up, do us all a favor and stop writing. Maybe some day you will get some deadly disease.

I loved the ending.

:)

There is a twist in the story

Was not expecting that ending..Pulitzer ending. Thank u. Wow

WTF did i just read?