by Tzara
Not that I haven't always been awed by your poetry, but your recent pieces are incredible. Thank you!
Love the piece's rhythm and the sharp, concise language. No word is wasted. Very poignant and touching, well-executed as always.
Vd
beautiful and cutting in this reader's opinion. Poignant, concise - with no space wasted - and meaningful.
Deep insight into what the common man had to contend with on top of everything else in troubled times
I am moved...by words like "a", "an" and "the" and a few others. Very nice.